This is my C.V.. wat job do u think i might get and how much would i be paid??

Curriculum Vitae














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Phone#


Email:@yahoo.co.in





Objective:


Seeking a responsible and challenging career in a reputed organization where I can utilize my skills and contribute for the development of the organization.





EDUCATIONAL PROFILE:





1 Completed BscIT from Sikkim Manipal University () in first attempt.





2 Completed Multimedia Graphics %26amp; Animation in the year April (2006) With grade B and scoring 6.95/10. from Aptech





2 Completed PC Hardware, MCSC-Windows2003, MS-Exchange Server CISCO Router Training (CCNA), RHCE Linux Administration From ZOOM Technologies (2007).





3. Passed CBSE with (61%) in 2006 from IIS High School.





Skills





Having Knowledge of : Internet, networking.


Operating Systems Known : Window’s 98, Me, 2000, Xp , Red Hat Linx





Packages : MS Office.





Personal Strengths:





1 Conscience.

This is my C.V.. wat job do u think i might get and how much would i be paid??
not bad..





i think somewhere around 1000$/ months..
Reply:Have you considered working with computers?





I thought your CV was very boring.





It looks like the panel on the box my new lap-top came out of.





Skills? What about personal attributes? What sort of person are you?





Don't forget you are selling yourself here-not a lap-top. Are you honest gently kind hard working? Smart apearance? Good communicator, helpful, good at using time, quick thinking? Do you have an open mind, what about your attitude? Are you ambitious, do you have a thirst for knowledge? What about your back ground?


Have you managed to move yourself forward dispite having problems?


I don't know anything about you from your CV, are you a person or a machine....





Also your English is poor!





""Objective:


Seeking a responsible and challenging career in a reputed organization where I can utilize my skills and contribute for the development of the organization. ""





Maybe you should write





My objectives;


"I would like to enter into a challenging career with a reputable organisation who will invest in me. I hope to develop my skills and move forward into a position of responsibility".





Just another point, you put "languages known" at the end, this makes me cringe it is so bad, I know lots of languages!


French Spanish German Italian Greek Portugese Chinese Icelandic-but I cant speak any of them!





So what you are saying to the reader? Your first language is English? Your English is poor.





You need to stop using this template and write more freely. You should start again with a style which suits your content. And not use a pre- arranged style template.